From bf2ad15fe0a311685204d1923520178a3b999102 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: A Holt <holta@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Sep 2020 09:44:07 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Refine roles/network/README.rst

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 roles/network/README.rst | 11 ++++++-----
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diff --git a/roles/network/README.rst b/roles/network/README.rst
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 Network README
 ==============
 
-This is run by Ansible after it has installed the core (`Stages 0-to-9 <https://github.com/iiab/iiab/wiki/IIAB-Contributors-Guide#ansible>`_) of Internet-in-a-Box (IIAB) and its apps/services.
+This is run by `Ansible <http://wiki.laptop.org/go/IIAB/FAQ#What_is_Ansible_and_what_version_should_I_use.3F>`_ after it has installed the core (`Stages 0-to-9 <https://github.com/iiab/iiab/wiki/IIAB-Contributors-Guide#ansible>`_) of `Internet-in-a-Box (IIAB) <http://internet-in-a-box.org>`_ and its apps/services.
 
-Specifically, this 'network' role is run:
+Specifically, this 'network' role is run...
 
-- automatically during IIAB installation, after /opt/iiab/iiab/iiab-install has run `Stages 0-to-9 <..>`_ (thanks to `iiab-stages.yml <../../iiab-stages.yml>`_)
-- automatically by IIAB's Admin Console (http://box/admin) if you click ``Configure`` menu -> ``Install Configured Options`` — this is similar to the above, but only runs Stage 0, then Stage 4-to-9, and then finally this 'network' role/stage (thanks to `iiab-from-console.yml <../../iiab-from-console.yml>`_)
-- or manually, if you run ``cd /opt/iiab/iiab`` then `./iiab-network <../../iiab-network>`_ (which is much the same as running ``./runrole network``)
+- ...automatically during IIAB installation, after `/opt/iiab/iiab/iiab-install <../../iiab-install>`_ has run `Stages 0-to-9 <..>`_ (thanks to `iiab-stages.yml <../../iiab-stages.yml>`_)
+- ...automatically by IIAB's Admin Console (http://box/admin) if you click ``Configure`` menu -> ``Install Configured Options`` — this is similar to the above, but only runs Stage 0, then Stage 4-to-9, and then finally this 'network' role/stage (thanks to `iiab-from-console.yml <../../iiab-from-console.yml>`_)
+- ...or manually, if you run ``cd /opt/iiab/iiab`` then `./iiab-network <../../iiab-network>`_ (which is much the same as running ``./runrole network``)
 
 Many IIAB networking questions can be answered in these 2 documents:
 
 - `IIAB Networking <https://github.com/iiab/iiab/wiki/IIAB-Networking>`_ is a high-level summary, that reviews IIAB's 3 modes of operation distinguishing WAN from LAN, `common ports <https://github.com/iiab/iiab/wiki/IIAB-Networking#list-of-open-ports--services>`_, DNS name resolution and some common customizations.
 - http://FAQ.IIAB.IO includes answers to common questions like:
 
+  - What is local_vars.yml and how do I customize it?
   - How do I provide Wi-Fi (wireless) to all my kids?
   - Can I create a Wi-Fi hotspot using an old laptop?
   - How do I change the wireless network name?